Buildings can form a great backdrop to a scene, but they can also be used to tell us about the characters’ mind-set, past and even their future. Buildings can show the passing of time, add tension to a scene or show the class the character has been born into or aspire to join. Buildings are an amazing tool and are, in my opinion, not used to their full potential, yet they can draw a reader into the story and help them to walk in the footsteps of the characters themselves.
An example of this is Manderley, the house in Dauphne Du Maurier’s Rebecca. It holds a sense of doom for the new Mrs De Winter. Its rooms feel haunted by her husband’s former wife, the heirlooms are hers and even her portrait still hangs on the wall and gets her into trouble. In addition to all this, the housekeeper constantly reminds the new wife how Rebecca liked to run it. Little by little the present Mrs De Winter feels overshadowed by the former wife as her confidence is gradually whittled away. Mrs De Winter never meets Rebecca in the novel, she doesn't need to. The house is a constant, imposing reminder of how great her husband's former wife was and the housekeeper uses the building to her full advantage to taunt her about this every moment she can.
When I wrote
A Daughter's Christmas Wish, I ensured that each main character had a building linked to them which helped to tell their story.
The heroine, Rose, feels lonely and trapped in her unexciting life living with her parents. Her mother still grieves for the loss of her son and is unable to move on in her life. Their home reflects this and, hopefully, the reader will be able to empathize with Rose's feeling of being trapped in a dull life. If only she had someone who could help her to feel festive again as Christmas approaches … cue the arrival of a lone soldier, called Nicholas.
Nicholas has returned from the Great War and has a promise to fulfil - to give a fellow soldier’s fiancé, Rose, the Christmas she has always wanted. Once again I have used his home to show his class, the past he has tried to hide from and how the passing of time (and war) have changed it. He also imagines the future too, which I hope shows his mindset in that moment.
Yet for these two people, who are from very different classes, to meet I needed a neutral setting and, for the first time in my writing career, I used a place of work – a teashop. This allowed them to meet and be alone together, an oasis for their festive countdown to Christmas to begin and their relationship to grow. It is where shy Rose feels most confident. This allows her to blossom and think about leaving her grief for her fiance behind her. Hopefully the reader will feel that they are watching Nicholas and Rose from a quiet corner of the room as these two people learn to live in peacetime again.
As a writer one must use all the tools at hand. We often use smell, taste, sound, feel, sight, thought and internal emotions to convey what our characters are experiencing, but the buildings that form a backdrop to their lives can also speak volumes - in their own quiet way.
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I love this post! I very often start with a place in my dual timeline novels, and consider what that building was like in the historical time period and what it has become now.
ReplyDeleteBuildings often inspire my writing too. I can see I am not alone in that. :)
DeleteWhat a great idea for a writing-related blogpost. Our surroundings, whether home or not, can influence how we feel - for good or bad - which brings other emotions apart from the ones of the storyline into play. Strangely, I'm writing about a house that gets changed from a home to a business and how that affects all those concerned .... creepy that this has popped up now!
ReplyDeleteSounds interesting, Linda. Now I am wondering what the business was. :)
DeleteThis post totally resonates with me! Buildings -- especially historical old houses with stories in their bones -- deeply enrich any story. Manderley is a perfect example of this. Great post!
ReplyDeleteThank you Terry. I love old buildings. Thank goodness for the National Trust which allows us to peak inside and keep them in a good state. :)
DeleteI enjoyed reading this post Victoria. I love old buildings and I'm lucky that part of our quirky cottage is 100 years old - mind you it was originally a cow shed.
ReplyDeleteA part of our house was a milking parlour too! :)
DeleteJennie - our next door neighbours' house was originally a byre (Scots word for cow shed) too, which now makes up two lovely large family homes. Fabulous post, Victoria. I don't think I've ever used a building as character and yet I love to read stories with a strong setting and a building is a wonderful vehicle of achieving that end.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rae. :)
DeleteWhat a lovely post! I'm very attracted to buildings, especially ones with character, but as Rae says, I've never used one effectively as a character.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jo. Glad you enjoyed it. :)
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