Showing posts with label emotion. Show all posts
Showing posts with label emotion. Show all posts

Saturday, 27 July 2019

On writing emotion


Write what you know, they say.

Well, yah boo sucks to that, I say. How would fantasy, historical, science fiction, or even crime ever get written? If all authors stuck rigidly only to their own sphere of knowledge and experience then the world of literature would be a very boring place.

So I'd amend this to: Use what you know.

Use the experiences you've had to colour your novels, and especially use the emotions you have experienced to add depth. Holding your newborn baby; cradling an elderly much-loved pet as the vet gives that final injection; attending a sporting event when the team you're supporting wins; being first on the scene at a traffic accident; watching the Millennium fireworks; watching TV as the twin towers fell on 9/11; holding your mother's hand as she breathes her last - I've experienced all these as I guess many readers will have, too. And those intense emotions can be channelled into scenes I write.

Me, hours after giving birth to my second child.

I'm not advocating writing scenes that tell of your experiences exactly as they happened - some are far too private for that. No one's ever going to read of my mother's last moments. But that "chip of ice" in my writer's heart stored away exactly how I felt at the time for future use, and that's what I can use (and have already used).

A wise quote from a great writer.

Harrowing though it might be, when writing the death of a character, think back to how you felt when someone you loved died, relive it, and try to tap into that emotion. If you make yourself cry when writing it then you'll probably make the reader cry when reading it, and it is the emotional novels that people most remember afterwards. I'd suggest not trying to do this too soon- emotional experiences need time to bed in, to become a part of who you are. It's after this has happened that you can use them in your writing.

Mum. Gone but never forgotten.

Same goes for the joyous, happy occasions. Relive the moment, re-experience the feelings, and pour it all out as you write. Your reader will feel it too. And the dramatic, tense moments - you may have been holding your breath simply awaiting the email confirming your son's A level results, but you can use those feelings in any scene you write that requires tension and it'll work.

A marvellous writing tutor I used to have always advised when writing the "big" scenes, to put as much emotion as you possibly can on the page, and then treble it. Tapping into your own emotional memories is the way to do this. Use what you've experienced.




Saturday, 18 February 2017

THE HOLY GRAIL OF WRITING by Victoria Cornwall

I was driving my car the other day, whilst keeping a lookout for deranged drivers and wild animals with a suicidal desire to become my next road kill victim. I am not being melodramatic here. After decades of driving on country roads, I have come to the conclusion that animals line the grass verges to wait for my car to come along. Anyway, during my journey the lyrical, haunting tune of Send in the Clowns came on the radio. A melancholy atmosphere descended as I absorbed the sad, beautiful lyrics sung by Judy Collins. I was about to start blubbering into my steering wheel, when I was saved by the DJs next choice, The Eurhythmics collaboration with Aretha Franklin, Sisters are doin' it for themselves. Suddenly the world seemed brighter and I felt empowered. I finished my journey with a big smile on my face and a slight bounce to my driving. Within a short space of time I had swung from normal, to deep sadness, to feeling extremely happy ... and it got me thinking. 

Music is the end result of someone's creativity, just as a painting, a poem, a book or a beautifully crafted statue or figurine. There is an endless list of how a person's creativity can manifest, but I suspect that all creative people strive to do the same thing ... to evoke a feeling, an emotion, a reaction from those that see it, feel it, use it or read it.  

Painter, illustrator and sculpture, Richard Artschwager, once said, "There isn't any art until some creature sees and consumes it. And has a reaction." Perhaps that is what drives us all. I know many writers will say that they would write even if no one ever saw what they had produced, however, I suspect the majority of writers have a desire to share their craft with like-minded people who will hopefully enjoy it.

A successful novel will evoke a reaction in a reader. Some novels will take a reader through the whole range of emotions. The transitions between these emotions and reactions may be sudden or deceptively subtle, gradual or a non-stop fast ride where the reader hangs on by their fingernails. Hopefully there will also be the odd moments of reflection or relaxation to make the next stage of the story all the more stimulating. A reaction a writer does not want to evoke is boredom or frustration with the plot or the characters within the story.


I believe that the holy grail of writing is to evoke the emotion that the writer intends to evoke, at the precise moment they planned it to happen, at just the right momentum a reader wants or needs. When a writer hits those markers, they have been successful in their quest. However, in my opinion, it is not the reader who has the greatest reaction in the end … it is the creator ... for they have achieved what they set out to do, and that is a euphoric, heady experience that cannot be matched.

By
VICTORIA CORNWALL

Do you agree that evoking emotions/feelings/reactions in a reader is The Holy Grail of writing? 
Can you recall a particular book which evoked a strong reaction in you?

I would love to hear your thoughts.